Facebook is becoming more and more central to our life as it has obvious benefits, but there are dangers it may exert over our lives.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should write at least 250 words.
Some people think that Facebook is getting more and more important to our life because of its advantages, but it also causes dangers for us. I disagree with this opinion.
In my opinion, Facebook makes people closer everywhere. Although you are far from where you live, you can contact with your parents by Facebook. You miss your friends but you are in Africa or America? Don't worry, because Facebook will help you. Besides providing users other's posts, videos,.., Facebook also has "messenger" which can text messages and call video without wasting money. Furthermore, Facebook makes a wide range friendship around the world. You can make friends with whoever you like because Facebook have no rules about your choosing.
On the other hand, Facebook gives us information that you don't have to surf the internet. If you want to find news about something, just click on " Finding" and write what you want to read, then there are many posts for you to read. You can both watch other's posts, states, stories and gain news. So that, we can save more time.
In conclusion, Facebook has many interesting and funny things and believe me, you will like it right after you have a Facebook account!
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also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00490196078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60616100105 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.00370489 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9285714286 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292999278401 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113986710641 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640555483147 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192248197904 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631236540268 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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