Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is argued that schools should push more in letting students give feedback to their teachers. I agree with this opinion. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that these evaluations make the equality in society like that, especially between learners and educators and secondly, discuss the friendliness among students and teachers.
With the performance of society, although there is a big distance in age, social position, academies should accept students to remark their instructors. Schools can take place talks, evaluated tests, games, etc, which are up to students' desire. Therefore, students can improve their cognitive decision. And schools in Vietnam are a prime example, where students are good at estimating in projects, collaborative events or in each activity.
Not only that, evaluations also help students and schoolteachers understand each other more. Teachers may see it as valuable lessons to look back their behaviour and think over what to repair, what to enhance and from that, teachers will have other ways to adapt to their children' s wish. For example, when educating methods are changed, students may feel more confident, less embarrassing, confusing or scaring when learning or talking to them.
In conclusion, schools should be aware of that and do it as fast as possible for the good relationship in the classroom and for the right of younger people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35909090909 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78150250734 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9054785085 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233302618699 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889358591633 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476634743542 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132367194621 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497996820931 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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