Which of these forms of protest make the most impact:
• Going on strike
• Participating in marches
• Disseminating information through social media
In the context of the conflicting situation occurring these days in the whole country, we are here to analyse which way to protests produce the most impact: going on strike, marching or spread info through social media. For me, the kind of protest with most impact is going on strike but in specific industries, paralysing the production of necessary goods for the entity that you are fighting against.
One of the good reasons to go on strikes is that stopping production increases the necessity of the goods and the uncertainty of the availability of that in the future. With that, the fear is born, people around start panicking and looting for the limited resources. The people themself start marching asking for solutions and spreading information about what’s happening so indirectly going on strike leads to marching and to speaking about it. For example, most of the times when there happens to be a general disagree between society and the government, when the truck drivers go on strike, they cease the transport of different kinds of goods and mostly food, emptying the stands of the markets worrying the people so the disagreement with the government increases, like what happened in 1970’s during Salvador Allende’s presidency.
Another reason is stopping the production of goods it also stops the moving of capital and investment. This affects directly the pockets of the industry managers forcing them to pay the lost capital making them to think if they want to repeat that situation again. As an example we have the situation in the public sector where due to the economic growth of the country, the public workers receive a bonus every year during de annual readjustment of the budget, this is made to prevent strikes in the public sector. The most controversial case is in the mining sector. Miners of the copper corporation go on strike every three or four years. So to prevent the stopping of the production, the corporation investors, gives to the workers huge amounts of money in bonuses (in December 2016 was $4.350.000 each worker.
Because of these two reasons I think that going on strike and stopping the production of goods in key industries is the best way to protest against an employee or against any repressive authority. This action leads to decreasing their finances and to producing uncertainty.
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...ecember 2016 was .350.000 each worker. Because of these two reasons I think tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i think, kind of, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06426735219 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74113388993 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53470437018 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5608197177 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7857142857 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261728741036 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819983951668 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991240732638 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165620472599 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123369723347 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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