Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit.
Discuss both the views with your opinion.
There two concepts among people regarding fitness are working out at gym and following other health tips. According to me, both have their own distinct rule in one's life, yet going to gym is much effective for health.
People, who are in favor of joining gym believe that they will get proper training from eminent trainer. Therefore, their health will be stronger. To elaborate, as people pay for joining gym, It will become trainner responsibility to provide proper guidness for their clint health; thus, it is said that gym is a better solution of being fit and healthy.People who are in favor of joining gym believe that they will get proper training from eminent trainer. Therefore, their health will be stronger. To elaborate, as people pay for joining gym, It will become trainner responsibility to provide proper guid for their clints' health; thus, it is said that gym is a better solution of being fit and healthy. Likewise, people will be more serious for workout at gym since they have to pay. Moreover, gyms are fully equipped, so people will be encouraged to do exercise, which helps them to be fit and healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...at gym and following other health tips. According to me, both have their own distinct rule in o...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e, both have their own distinct rule in ones life, yet going to gym is much effectiv...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...etter solution of being fit and healthy.People who are in favor of joining gym believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85492227979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55104404381 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487046632124 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0450490445 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207074195215 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104642323487 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506354358842 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170433517776 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00115276159032 0.056905535591 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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