Appearances are deceitful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
There is no doubt that appearance play a big role how people judge others. Personally, I agree with the statement and I think that it is not right to judge other people only by their clothes. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons, that I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, one should note here that the great majority of citizens try to show their best aspects and hide negative sides. Basically, it helps them to be more confident in life and it makes a strong impression on strangers. However, it is not rarely when this confidence falls into pieces after a small dialogue. The great example of this can be found in several stores where people buy cloth. Recently, I had to give my jaket away because of some problems with the quality. After my explanations a manager in a local shop became angry and refused to take it, despite the fact that it wasn’t my mistake. As a result, a nice looking man with a smile turned out into a short-tempered person.
Secondly, the way how people dress doesn’t define a person’s preferences and possibilities. It is undeniable that some companies require a strict dresses in order to fit the image of the company, but most of the workers prefer casual or sport style. It means that a good-looking man in a dinner suit can be an ordinary worker with a small salary from a local firm, while a person in a t-shirt and jeans can be a millionaire. The greatest example of such person is Bill Gates, who likes casual style and doesn’t spend plenty of money on cloth.
To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that in most situations a man’s appearance in not able to tell truth about him or her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'dress'?
Suggestion: dress
...le that some companies require a strict dresses in order to fit the image of the compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, i think, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59468438538 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.715088712 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1786832389 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984955130936 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318719514059 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296087903983 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061548801769 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382973596025 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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