The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

The bar chart illustrates performance over four-time periods (2002, 2003,2004 & 2005) by the three Teams (A, B and C).

Overall, in the time span of four years, Team B is the leader through all the seasons regardless of decreasing and earning, while Team A and Team C pursue the same

Pattern.

Scored 82 points by the Team B for the 2002 season which decreased significantly for the next two years (60 points and 43 points respectively). After that, Team B recovered its performance by adding 12 points for the last period mentioned.

The other two groups accumulated significantly less points in comparison to Team B. Therefore, they started in 2002 with 5 for Team A and 10 points for Team C and increased to 11 and 15 points respectively for the 2003 session. In season 2001, Team A exceeded Team C ́s number of points, scoring the highest figure, of 43, for its group. However, for the end time (2005), both teams (A and C) finished with score 8 points and 5 points respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 48, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun points is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7183908046 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82158444416 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8556547222 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219942737922 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117288222272 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760453091088 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16685175894 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786988850103 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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