The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between
1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph depicts the portion of the citizens aged 65 and above in between the years 1940 and 2040 in three distinct countries. At the first glance it is clear that in 1940 USA stood 1st by 9% while Japan was only 5%. However, by the end of 2040 positions changes as Japan stood 1st with 28% where USA stood last with 23%.
We can observe that USA is represented by a black line and Sweden with green. Both the nations had 9% and 7% in 1940 with a contrast of 2%, from there to 1980 they maintained a constant difference of 1%. By comparison in 2000 both nations had same proportion which is 14%. From 2000 onwards USA portion was constant until 2020 then by the end of 2040 it lasted with 22%.
Since 2020 Sweden rose up and fell down to 18% in 2020 and by the end of 2020 it stood in between both nations with 25%. On the other hand Japan was at bottom in 1940 with 5% and climbed up significantly without any fall till 2040. Japan had the highest proportion by 2040 with 27% and stood first among other two nations.
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness? 56
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
- Coin and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and debit card.Eventually, we will have cashless society which will be safer and more convenient to everyone. 78
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 73
- Coin and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and debit card.Eventually, we will have cashless society which will be safer and more convenient to everyone. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2385786802 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12407284098 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130337634298 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598200156887 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855133609969 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909942249244 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474915497426 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.49 61.2550243902 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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