Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
certain persons opine that music is a great way to promote cohesion among people of various cultures and age groups. music can be beneficial for bringing people together for social and noble causes. However, the content and the type of music can act as barriers. I agree with the argument that music which is pleasant and widely acceptable can be used for promoting harmony.
music is one of the forms of art which transcends boundaries of nations and attracts audience all around the world. it is not uncommon to see music lovers come together / unite enthusiastically despite belonging to different age groups, gender, caste or creed. it has been noted time and again that people belonging to varying backgrounds have joined hands for several social and charitable causes by virtue of their common liking for music.
However, there are certain factors such as genre and lyrics which can affect this. For example, a person with interest in classical music might not prefer to attend a western music concert. If someone is not proficient in english, one might not prefer spending time with people who discuss english music. music with profane and objectionable content directed towards one particular sect of people might not be well received and may even adversely cause communal disharmony
Hence, I believe that music which is soothing, commonly understood and accepted can be used to promote bonding between the people of different cultures and ages. Also, it is essential to monitor the content of the music to assess the suitability as per the social and cultural norms for better acceptance.
In conclusion, music can be an excellent medium to unite people provided the limitations in the content and genre are addressed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17253521127 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59237226636 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.189664117 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237271251258 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913730968174 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478538872414 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139254069641 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402632511878 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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