The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... depict the percentage of the population ,who were in the 65 and the above age gro...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...65 and the above age group over 80 years ,starting from the 1940 to 2020 ,and show...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...80 years ,starting from the 1940 to 2020 ,and shows a future projection of next 20...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Overall
...rs in the three different nations. overall it can be seen that the proportion of t...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e seen that the proportion of the people ,who aged 65 and more rose from 1940 to p...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ed 65 and more rose from 1940 to present ,and this figure are expected to rise sig...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ountries. Looking at the line chart ,it clear that the percentage of the USA ...
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Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
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Suggestion: clears
...ies. Looking at the line chart ,it clear that the percentage of the USA populati...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hat the percentage of the USA population ,who were in the 65 and over age group gr...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ood at 7% in the beginning of the period ,This proportion increased dramatically a...
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Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... Moving on to the remaining data set ,it can clearly be seen that 5% of Japan ...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... 1940. This figure climbed to 7% in 2020 ,which was the lowest population among al...
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Line 13, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...est population among all three countries .This figure proportion will rise up to 2...
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Line 13, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: This
...t population among all three countries .This figure proportion will rise up to 20% o...
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Line 13, column 291, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... over the next 20 years and will become a highest in all three Nations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, similarly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41484716157 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40188169529 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46288209607 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4170827375 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.5 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337513969793 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182475826216 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559323773561 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225324111885 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385419112176 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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