The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
A glance at two figures provided illustrates a comparison of the mean household expenses among different categories in 1950 and 2010 in a country.
overall, it is evident that housing fee accounted for the majority of the expenditures in 1950, whereas food expense was the largest part for the figure in 2010.
With regard to 1950, housing was the major expense at that time, accounted for a staggering 72.1 percent. The second in terms of expenditures was food at 11.2 percent which was considerably lower than housing fee. followed by food, education expense was almost half of food, brought in 6.6 percent of overall expenditures. health care, transportation and other fees were relatively accounted for minority at 4.4, 3.3 and 2.2 percent respectively.
Compared with 1950, the figure in 2010 was more equally distributed. The percentage of food was 34 percent accounted for the largest part, followed by housing fee which was 22 percent at that moment. Third in terms of household expenditure was transportation at 19.2 percent. With around five percent less than transportation was health care. education and other costs were relatively small at 6.3 percent and 4.5 percent respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, third, whereas, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30208333333 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97355240224 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6595001713 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5454545455 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952168177707 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528058869817 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560993304413 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895787184658 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412393247229 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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