some people believe that eventually all the jobs will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?
Artificially intelligent robots are substituting humans in carrying out almost all kinds of jobs. Although the possibility of machines replacing humans is quite high, however, there would still be some jobs that might require the presence of humans. This essay will discuss why some jobs can not be done by robots and will be dependent on human beings.
In recent years, advancement in technology has increased to such an extent that all the common jobs that do not require constant human interactions will be performed by robots instead of humans. Many companies will prefer using a machine rather than investing time in hiring and polishing a human employee. In many customer service departments, for instance, employees have been replaced by chatbots that operate on artificial intelligence and provide solutions to the queries of the clients. For these reasons, most of the human beings might get replaced with robots.
On the other hand, there still are a few instances that can not be done without human labor as robots will never have the aptitude to do them. In simple words, the jobs require a 'human touch'. Take medicine, for example, In the diagnosis, the robot cannot accurately make a diagnosis. Even with the advancement in technology in the medical field, there is no machine that is intelligent enough to carry out the functions of the doctor. Thus, although the machines are taking over most of the human functions, there are some of the functions which the machine cannot perform.
To conclude, It is most likely that most of the humans will lose their jobs because of machines. The work that does not demands human skills will eventually be done by robots; however, complicated jobs that require human-specific abilities will always exist.
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n-specific abilities will always exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12413793103 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66149046778 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8352213919 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262327012737 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967404830893 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614893303648 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183554333216 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698382494281 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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