Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
*Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?*
Toys are the best memories of childhood. A number of parents buy their kids a huge amount of toys to make their joy time more playful. Having such a privilege has it own benefits and drawbacks. The following essay will shine the light over both sides of the matter.
A positive aspect of giving children a number of playing material is that it will keep them busy in their leisure time. So being occupied, pupils will not be exposed to any unhealthy or unethical activity such as getting involved in elderly talk or fall prey to drug intake. A study at the University of Toronto revealed that children who play with number of different toys tend to have a high IQ level when compared with other children.
However, excess of anything is harmful to human nature. Providing kids with unnecessarily amount of toys will make them materialistic in nature. Moreover, a kid plays with toys just for a while and then either it is thrown away in store room or wasted. Rather spending a hefty amount on something which is for such a short span, it should be invested in something which has meaningful outcome. For instance, engaging them in outdoor activities like learning horse riding or karate.
In the end, it all depends on ones circumstances whether providing lots of playful material will help their kids or distract them for the world. But, every facility or opportunity comes with a positive and negative impact that we have to choose according to our preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...ren a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages fo...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?* Toys are the best memories ...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...playful. Having such a privilege has it own benefits and drawbacks. The following e...
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Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th toys just for a while and then either it is thrown away in store room or waste...
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Line 13, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...is thrown away in store room or wasted. Rather spending a hefty amount on something wh...
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Line 17, column 246, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
... negative impact that we have to choose according to our preference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82978723404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59815607096 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6719452439 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503849433538 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147344059611 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225893197988 0.0667982634062 338% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335986720924 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.336172108203 0.056905535591 591% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.