these days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children
while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this?
Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
it is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of
househusband, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their
families. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a
very positive trend.
In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our
societies. equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has
become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. it
has also become socially acceptable for men to stay at home and look
after their children. At the same time, the rising cost of living has meant
that both marriage partners usually need to work and save money before
starting a family. Therefore, when couples have children, they may decide
who works and who stays at home depending on the personal preference
of each partner, or based on which partner earns the most money.
In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We
should be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal
opportunities, and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice
their careers. equally, it seems only fair that men should be free to leave
their jobs in order to assume childcare responsibilities if this is what they
wish to do. couples should be left to make their own decisions about which
parental role each partner takes, according to their particular
circumstances and needs.
In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a
result of wider changes in society, and I believe that these developments
are desirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96350364964 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66788321168 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0331543963 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222373829688 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794944283808 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649815441162 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551753979306 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568603438246 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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