TPO37
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
In today's modern life, thanks to the technological breakthroughs in every section of science, the daily ruotins has altered dramaticaly. Some prople are of the opinion that busy days would make careless maters, while I personaly sunscribe to the view that we do lots of things during our life; however it dose not mean that we cannot finish them as betehr as we can. I feel this for the devises that we have and because of the paying attention to the quality of things rather that quantities.In the following paraghraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To beging with, I cannot deny the fact that we have to do many things in a short time; nevertheless, aur life is full of ease and confortable time rather than the past, achieving to thechnologies. Generally speaking, in the characterof humans this fact is fixed, should they demad something, they would attempt for it. Unfortunatly, we acssess to selliant advanced devises, inorder to tacke difficulties. this hegh-tech devises erranfing from transporting goods to cominuational things such as selphone, internet, and sical medias, help us to continuing our life in the best practical way. To delve more into it, take a employee as an example. In the past, a employee should has spent their time to writing or dunlicated for examle papers and documants by themselfs, wherease, today's he can do it in ths shorter time, resulting in spend the time in the bether way.
Secondly, I beilieve that although the life of the individualls are busy, they pay more attention to quality of the works because the quality of demandings also increases in these days. For examle, we need bether cars with the most quality and the features, therefore, the producter should pay attention to this point to prevent the costomers.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, I beilive that our pridictivity because of the busy days are not less. Not only do we have variety of factors that help us to be better, but also the demands in societies riquer the best quality and productivites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90229885057 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82838625258 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9345792262 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134369325642 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439968436897 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332956120937 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08060818936 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191599501502 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.