Agree or disagree?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems.
The development of technologies with a fast pace have great effects on our life. one of these effects is emerging on the internet. I agree with the mentioned statement that the internet gives us crucial information since it helps us to enhance our knowledge and find out what is happening all around the world.
The first aspect to point out is that the internet helps many people to increase their knowledge which is valuable information in the present area. It changes forms of our life. On of its change is the format of learning. In the past, it was not possible for all people to learn and expand their information. But, nowadays internet connection is around all the world and it is possible for remote cities and village to learn by using the internet. Throughout internet there are adverse and many online courses that every person can use them easily. This way of learning removes the obstacles in front of the people who are placed in the remote zone and do not have access to books or teachers. Therefore, these kind of information on the internet is essential for our world and help people to progress in their life.
The other reason worth mentioning here is that we can understand what is really happening in our universe. Today many events are happening in our world every day. There are many websites that cover these matters. The problem is that many of them tell lie and do not state accurate information. For example, our universe is in danger of global warming because of the production of CO2 in-universe. However, the politician and people who are responsible for this matter do not let the true news come out. They use their power and wealth to change the new for themselves. Having the internet helps us to understand the problem better and after knowing these all people looking for finding solutions.
To make a long story short, people who using internet, gain a lot of vital information since there are many things happening all around the world. It is obvious that using the internet endangered copious problems but I think its merits are much more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...st pace have great effects on our life. one of these effects is emerging on the int...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...access to books or teachers. Therefore, these kind of information on the internet is essen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75966850829 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50443884191 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488950276243 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5658411046 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216086816392 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602489129449 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520871583803 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139396334698 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482571368402 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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