Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of watching tv programs. Many people deem that this kind of activities is only waste of time, furthermore it affects youth psychologically , while others have a conviction that watching movies or news help young people to broad their horizons. it is my firm belief that television programs enhance people' outlook, I feel this way for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that movies have greatest impact on human beings. Someone can influenced negatively, however I deem that it depends on person , his preferences ,hence, we can not say that these activities disadvantageous. furthermore, movies which are really well-structured helps us to understand it's meaning and think about our own lives. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my on personal experience. about two years ago, with my classmates we decided to watch movie, which seems to be funny.By and large, we were right, however it was not only funny ,at the same time movie was really meaningful. while watching I understood that there is no much time to spend for meaningless things,so we have to spend it accurately.
Another equally vital reason that should be highlighted here is intelligence of human beings. I can surely say that programs such as national geographic, british broadcasting corporation help us to evolve our skills. Drawing from my own experience I recognized that that fact is true. Once while watching tv I pay attention to history of indian culture, that was really interesting. Approximately after week I had debates , so topic was about asian culture. All in all, that program helped me to show my broad outlook.
Last but not least, one of the most essential information in televisions is advertisement. Trough advertisements, especially in our city, unemployed people find jobs, soe organizations enhance sale of their product.
In light of all aforementioned reasons,it is explicitly obvious that television has more benefits rather that it's cons. Improving skills, increasing intelligence of society and deplete unemployment rate let me think that television is profitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, look, really, so, well, while, i feel, kind of, such as, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22191780822 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0787120079 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8605492809 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.315789474 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115439729751 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032025347532 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311125707138 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632482840637 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454131796976 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.