parents should be legally
Parents are responsible for the upbringing of child. Children in their early age learn many lessons of life from parents. Therefore, I agree that parents should be legally responsible for children‘s behavior. This essay will discuss about possible reasons for this and with example.
Firstly, children spend most time with their parents. There for they always learn many facts like language and behavior from parents. Hence, it parents failed to fulfill this duty then they should be held legally for children’s act. For instance, in American legal system, many parent's punished for child’s behavior. Therefore, parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that.
Secondly, children are very close to parents and parents closely monitor child’s growth. So, parents are pretty much aware of positive and negative side of child. Thus, if they fail to point out such mistakes of child then indirectly they are also responsible for child’s act. For instance, many terrorists come from such families that in which parents do not have any control on child. Therefore, parents are equally responsible for child’s crime.
In conclusion, as parents play critical and vital role in child’s upbringing they clearly know child’s behavior and traits. Therefore they are also responsible for children’s act and should be held legally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... know child's behavior and traits. Therefore they are also responsible for children&...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67452830189 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91207023943 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6820057882 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1875 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279107102151 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123517173287 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132636123263 0.071462118173 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210185490002 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712737225857 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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