TPO 13
The reading states that since the sale of fossils especially dinosaurs and large vertebrates become big businesses for collectors. They do not let other people observe their collected fossils. Hence, the interest of the people is decreased toward fossils. However, the professor states that these big businesses have more advantages that outweigh its disadvantages and give three logical proof.
First, based on the reading, collectors of fossils pay a lot of money for purchasing them which universities and museums can not afford this amount of money. In contrast, the author explains that there are plenty of fossils in which their price is low-level and any museums have the ability to buy them and put them in the public environment for humans to see them.
Second, the passage asserts that scientists do not have access to prominent fossils. These fossils have a lot of vital information and scientist can make a discovery based on them. Nevertheless, the lecturer explains that private collectors do not know which fossils are important. Therefore, they can not put a price on them. When private collectors gain a fossil, they call an expert which is a scientist to exam these fossils. The scientist who uses examination on these fossils obtains much information. Therefore, scientists will not miss valuable knowledge.
Third, according to the reading, most commercials who find the fossils, do not pay attention to the exact place of them and move them without memorizing their exact position and it leads to removing evidence for scientists. The place of the fossils near each other can help scientists to make a discovery. on the contrary, the author demonstrates that it is true that commercial does not pay attention to fossils' position and this harms the scientist, but numerous fossils are discovered thanks to the commercial's effort and money. If it was not for them many other fossils would be undiscovered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...an help scientists to make a discovery. on the contrary, the author demonstrates t...
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Line 7, column 503, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'commercials'' or 'commercial's'?
Suggestion: commercials'; commercial's
...us fossils are discovered thanks to the commercials effort and money. If it was not for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, in contrast, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16932907348 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80222110472 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.3538763121 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522880381824 0.272083759551 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167407670922 0.0996497079465 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876740721752 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306714385599 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085962102541 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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