Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to you to seek your permission to take admission in the cad-laboratory course which is being recently offered by our college. If it would have been previously included, I would have been the first one to reserve my seat. However, the only exception in my case is that I have never received any formal basic training of the computers.
To be honest, computers have always stimulated my imagination but because of an unsound status I was not able to opt this subject in my primary school as there were additional charges for this. Despite of the fact of my weak financial status I kept on acquiring knowledge about it through my internet. Finally, today I am able to join this advance course.
Finally, I want you to help me to pursue my passion by allowing me to sit in the class. You can even have a justification of my declaration by taking the test of my skill. I would be really grateful for you if you could make it for me.
Yours Sincerely,
Veronica Jackson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
... recently offered by our college. If it would have been previously included, I would have been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63736263736 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69040075997 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0761326502 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295366754507 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109816708682 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775357761623 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20661875715 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831459011341 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.