Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
It is considered by some people that attaining popularity at the early age is advantageous, while others think that it has got only detrimental effects. This essay will highlight the disadvantages of becoming a well-known person at the younger age.
To begin with, many young artists, sports personal and athletes need to spend huge amount of time in performing their rehearsals and as a result they hardly find time to attain the primary education at school. Furthermore, some may not even appear in a single class per week or on their final exams. Without a base education, they will highly lack a basic quality as a child or a discipline. For instance, A recent survey conducted in United states revealed that 60% of the young celebrities who failed to pass Grade V are struggling in one to one interview as their foundation was not rigid enough.
Secondly, Young talents are grown up in an atmosphere by facing huge amount of money and fame which in turn makes them to believe they are superior to others. Most importantly, some kids are not showing respect towards elders including their parents. In addition, because of their one-on monetary support makes them as a prey to indulge in anti-social activities like illegal contact with druggists, smoking especially liquor consumption and their entire life will be in vain.
To conclude, I strongly reckon that it is not ideal to let young people to taste the popularity at a very early age in life since it will school education and certain principles of life are highly obstructed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74181235217 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1501615879 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162382506077 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631247151317 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553233603554 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109863963568 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067537549713 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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