The bar graph indicates scales figures for reading material from 2002 to 2012.
This bar chart or column chart illustrates the kind of books that people have read them during 2002 to 2012. It is clearly observed that the data represented by the chart reflects certain insightful and interesting fluctuations. As can be seen, people have preferred different type of books in various years.
Overall, the chart shows that history books the most popular books in all years which the lowest of copies in 2002 were about 4200 and highest number of copies in 2012 were about 9000. According to the chart, hobbies books lowest publication than to others books in all years that were between 500 number of copies in 2006 and these were 1000 number of copies in 2004. In addition, the publication for art books have risen with year, and lowest statistic of publication were for 2002 and highest statistic of publication were 2012, which these were about 1800 volumes of books in 2002 and these were about 4000 volumes of books in 2012. Eventually, the trend of publication entertainment books were similar to art books and the lowest number of copies were in 2002 and highest number of copies were in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80310880829 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41571941402 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445595854922 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1100293427 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10627173813 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585673972795 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625553867099 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899409900046 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00941637032769 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.