People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that ancient constructs should be torn down and build new buildings. I completely agree with that it is necessary of replacing old buildings with new ones.
There are several reasons why some people would be opponents of constructing new buildings. Firstly, the real living volume might be fewer after rebuilding. An example is that, in Taiwan, public utilities of one neighborhood are also counted in the area that you own in legal aspect. Secondly, the process of rebuilding takes plenty of time, so the majority usually tend to have less willingness for it, though the government will subsidize them in the period when they go to rent houses. Finally, the internal decoration is good enough for most owners of old constructs because of they had already redecorated their home, which would make those people feel careless about the external appearance of buildings.
On the other hand, some safety problems could be the most vital issue why old buildings should be wrecked. For instance, former electronic panels need to be renewed as a result of the risk of fire of them. In addition, water pipes also should be change with new ones due to old pipes that might cause to health problem. Furthermore, there is an inconvenience of living in old apartments for the elderly. Most of old apartments have no elevators and if someone who is physically-challenged or is a senior, which would lead to a difficulty for them.
In conclusion, I do believe that there is a necessity for building new constructs to replace old ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...nough for most owners of old constructs because of they had already redecorated their home, whi...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
...In addition, water pipes also should be change with new ones due to old pipes that mig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88383349857 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8409417739 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222859463341 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837588756883 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672825737848 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157189888701 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604773096004 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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