All around the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should the government provide financial support to the local film industry
in the prevailing days, the preference of the domestically produced movies is decreasing day by day, this essay will discuss the reasons of watching foreign movies and why government shouild not provide funds to local film industry.
several reasons can be stated behind the increasing popularity of foriegn films. having more curiousity to learn about the other culturess is the first reason. because when people watch any foreing movie, they learn about their culture and tradition. moreover they also get to know about food and clothes which eat and wear in the movies respectively; however in local movies, they see their own cuilture, with which they are already familiar. apart from this, the budget of foriegn movies is higher than local movies because these films are released worldwide. so the quality of foreign films is better and equipments which are used in these movies are also very ecxpensive. along with this, those films are made in the supervision of professionals and they represent their films in a good manner; thus, the people are giving more preference to the foriegn films.
however, the authorities need not to spend money to promote domestic film industry because there are also many other sectors which are under developed, such as education, infrastructure, transportation, unemployment, poverty and health. should the government allocate money to improve these sectors, it would be fruitful for the betterment of any country. moreover, it is not the obligation of the government to provide financial support for the local films because there are many private companies which are already pro,moting this industry.
to conclude, the foriegn film ignites curiousity and they have better quality, that is why people watch more foriegn films. even though the popularity of the domestic movies is decreasing, the government should not reserve money for promoting local film industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34768211921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69434097113 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0274016471 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346706182443 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123320815663 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828033612234 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23348614725 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394758901693 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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