Nowadays in many countries women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this current era, it has become common that women have full-time jobs in various regions. Therefore, it is extremely logical that men should be responsible
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abundanceenough to share household chores evenly. Otherwise, it would be really difficult to manage everything together by one hand. However, this essay will state in support of managing household duties together with supportive example.
In my opinion, I completely agree with the point of dividing daily tasks like cleaning, vacuuming etc between men and women to keep balance daily life style which not only helps in developing a healthy relation on the contrary also increases the respect for each other. It's more or less like partnership. Lets take a view ofsome supportive points. Firstly, for any nuclear family, cooking, dusting or mopping takes hours to complete and also due to tight office schedule ladies are unable to put additional space from her daily routine for such jobs. Here, men's responsibility arrives to assist her. For an example, for married couple working ladies can't prearrange time from the timetable to take care of all task alone. Sometimes, husband should take the equal responsibility.
In other hand, few people never believe that it must be shared job as to them wives are only responsible person to accurately complete the task of after the office hours. Although, few exceptional cases are there when ladies look after both life together and balance unquestionably amazing way. Hence, in short, it is always recommended understanding your partner and help your spouse to make regular life-style comfortable.
In conclusion, it not consequently surprising that she can have full-time jobs. Therefore, men would be there to feel her boundaries and aid her in various ways.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...a, it has become common that women have full time jobs in many regions. Therefore, it is ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...o increases the respect for each other. Lets take a view of some of the supportive p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ect for each other. Lets take a view of some of the supportive points. Firstly, for any nuc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended understanding'.
Suggestion: recommended understanding
...zing way. Hence, in short, it is always recommended to understand your partner and help him or her to mak...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t not so surprising that women can have full time jobs. Therefore, men would be there to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93703703704 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61720853607 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.282418068 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232276550831 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758655424559 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793292821023 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142529634543 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572374542319 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...a, it has become common that women have full time jobs in many regions. Therefore, it is ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...o increases the respect for each other. Lets take a view of some of the supportive p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ect for each other. Lets take a view of some of the supportive points. Firstly, for any nuc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended understanding'.
Suggestion: recommended understanding
...zing way. Hence, in short, it is always recommended to understand your partner and help him or her to mak...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t not so surprising that women can have full time jobs. Therefore, men would be there to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93703703704 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61720853607 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.282418068 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232276550831 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758655424559 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793292821023 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142529634543 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572374542319 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.