You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house
In your letter describe
Yourself and your family
Which area you would like to live in
And what facilities you need in the house.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to enquire about, a house for rent. As, I have been personally recommended by a friend about your superior quality service. Hence, I would request to suggest a house for me, as per the requirement stated below.
I am a young doctor, who will be immigrating along with my wife in the first week of July 2020. As, I will be practising in Healthcare hospital, Carlton road, Toronto. It would be preferred if the house is near to the hospital.
Furthermore, I have a short list of features that the apartment should have. Firstly, fully-furnished, as i will be new to the place and look to quickly settle in. Another is, one bedroom on 10th floor or above with north facing window. However, I am open to suggestions.
Hope, you will get back with the best match within a reasonable price.
Please feel free to contact me on the mobile number given below.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-09-16 | phannguyenlananh | view | |
| 2021-08-17 | SKN | 84 | view |
| 2020-02-15 | abhishek1408 | 73 | view |
| 2020-02-15 | abhishek1408 | view | |
| 2019-02-26 | tahmeed1993 | 78 | view |
- Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses taxis and metro on vehicle free days To what extent do you think the advantages of 78
- You have recently started work in new company Write a letter to your friend In the letter Explain why you change job Describe your new job Tell him your other news You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows
- You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount Northern Ireland You need somewhere to live while you are there Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter explain your situation describe the accommodation
- City Council is planning to pull down one of the historic building in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it As citizen you don t want it to happen Write a letter to the city council and in your letter say What is the importance of the bu 78
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ter to enquire about, a house for rent. As, I have been personally recommended by ...
^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould have. Firstly, fully-furnished, as i will be new to the place and look to qu...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best match within a reasonable price. Please feel free to contact me on the mo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73815631402 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4764606204 44.8134815571 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135120373769 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426857409552 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529764978191 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614523938244 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623312864574 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.