Studies suggest children now watch more television than they did in the past and spend less time doing active or creative things. Why do you think this case.?what measure could taken solution.
The last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by the advancement in technological fields such as tv and computer. children spend more time in order to watch television than the past. this has become a trend especially in Asian countries. this essay will discuss the reasons why children watch more television is occurring, and offer some measure to tackle this issue.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why children watch tv is because it provide them more entertainment in spare time. this means that they watch funny movies, dramas and live sports. television not only provide information, but also it is a source of forget difficulties which they create in their personal life. Furthermore, In developing countries many grounds condition is not better. if they play sports there, they will get injured. As a result, they might not be able to complete their own dreams, which in turn leads to better future.
However, there are variety of possible solutions to resolve this issue. Firstly, government should provide more facilities to childrens. For example, Maintenance of sports grounds and also give funds to children about sports. Unless children play competitive sports, they will feel lonely, isolated and alienated, which in turn leads to serious problems, like as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether parents should restrictions on children that they do not watch tv must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, In today's globalized, urbanised and the over-populated world, this is a topic which is very relevant to the modern society. However, I believe the best solution could be that authorities should build new infrastructure of sports ground in every cities. if government implement rules on television, it will be better for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25249169435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83125878598 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8528940854 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244066592712 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742272645998 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834840675211 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141490770142 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717022920478 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.