n many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
In this modern era, people are suffering to find a place to build new homes, primarily, in the urban areas. Some people have thought that the availability of lands in the countryside would be the solution to this predicament. Others arguing that rural areas should be protected from the construction. As far as I concerned, homes are necessary, and with a little bit of planning, we can construct them in the rural area without causing any damage.
On the one hand, with the growing population, the demand for new residences is rising, and there is a limit to exploiting city lands for construction as well as they need to have some free spaces for the parks, garden, and orchards. Thus, it is not advisable to keep on building new houses in urban areas. Besides, it would increase pollution and affect the health of residents.
Building the resident in the uncultivated areas of the countryside would a feasible solution. The area is lying unused can be converted into the residential sector, which in turn, helps to divert the considerable amount of population into the outskirts of the city. Of course, there is a truth in the argument that villages should be protected from construction. However, in my view, addressing the need for housing is a more significant affair, and it cannot be neglected. Hence, rather than imposing a ban on construction activities, the government and environmental activists should come up with an appropriate solution without causing any damage to the landscape of the countryside.
To conclude, an intelligent construction plan should be welcomed while preserving the environment of the village. It is not only for tackling the housing problem but also conserves the beauty and purity of the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...cerned, homes are necessary, and with a little bit of planning, we can construct them in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, of course, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05208333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00504133707 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2944307433 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243115092629 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751139356256 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682872420384 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134427431795 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079147723656 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.