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Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
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Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 533, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. ...
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Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Write
... are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Write
... are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Write
... are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...stay with him/her on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Write
... are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 937.175257732 162% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 7.13615023474 4.54256449028 157% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 29.6876507851 2.54303337028 1167% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 43.0 127.690721649 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.201877934272 0.622605031667 32% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 142.794883305 44.8134815571 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 4.34317383033 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.29896907216 395% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.844723170887 0.216113520407 391% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.450633481222 0.0766984524023 588% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.212148848973 0.0603063233224 352% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356615104759 0.12726935374 280% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.271675286487 0.0580467560999 468% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 8.37731958763 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.84 8.71597938144 274% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.53 7.59969072165 20% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 10.0 41.2886597938 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.