Some people argue that charity organisations should help people wherever they live,others think they should help people in their own country. Discuss both views
Charity organisations are ubiquitous around the world. It is often argued whether such organisations serve people where ever they live or peoples in a home country only. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I think charity organisations should help people in other countries.
On the one hand, some argue that the helping hand of charity organisations should be limited to their own country. They claim that the needs of people should be addressed properly rather than focusing on global charity services. Humanity organisations in underdeveloped countries with a limited amount of financial resources have to aim the improvement of the people in their own countries. While
Despite this, others, myself included, believe that humanitarian services should be carried out based on the needs of people rather than the country which they belong to. In my view, such organisations have to extend their arms of services to people anywhere in the world to full fill human needs and values. The red cross society serves people across the world in desperate cases at the time of wars, catastrophic earthquakes, poverty, famine and floods is a perfect example of a charity organisation. Even though some organisations have financial limitations, they can be of help through manpower.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the people in their own countries. While Despite this, others, myself included, b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26442307692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91486939201 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0129465691 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559670970316 0.244688304435 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21134204184 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106559080095 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411370784308 0.151304729494 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107013205138 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the people in their own countries. While Despite this, others, myself included, b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26442307692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91486939201 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0129465691 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559670970316 0.244688304435 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21134204184 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106559080095 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411370784308 0.151304729494 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107013205138 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.