To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to the argument, studying major cities give you a better understandment of most important chacacteristics of a society. but I can not agree with that, because smaller cities have plenty of features to be studied, especially comparing to bigger and major cities.
In the first place, this statement can not be taken to consideration because in everything that we study, it is needed a comparison. Besides, major cities can have more importance regarding commerce, number of population and others reasons, but does not disqualified a not known city to be studied. For example, there is a study nowadays which compares people living in metropoles and people living in small cities, concerning about navigational skills.they did an experiment with a group of people borned in big cities such as New York, Los Angeles and another group that lives in smaller cities. The result was that metropolitan people have more problems to find themselves on streets than the other group. The ability of navigation is higher with people that leaves in cities that are less "complex", maybe because there is not need for a GPS or because they are already familiar where to find the stores, supermarkets, or other houses. In addition, when they are put in others cities, in comparison with the other group, they could find their way easier.this example shows why the statement might to hold true.it is extremely important to study others cities that sometimes are not so relevant comparing to major cities, but always have something to add.
The second point is the importance of smaller or not know cities.another example is Venice, which in the past the major city in italy was Rome, bacause of the importance of politics, religion, government and commerce.In the other hand,Venice was extremely important for italy regarding the sea port.In the past, was the most important please in europe where many trade happened. In the time where european countries, such as Portugal, Spain navigated to colonize or to bring species of another country,Venice was the main place where they traded those variety of food and others materials. And the same example is Rotterdam in Netherlands. Amsterdam is the major city there, but in Rotterdam, there is the biggest port in europe and is the place where exists the biggest concentration of companies and entreperneurs.
Therefore, according to these examples, it is possible to prove that the argument above does not hold truth and it is essential to study all kinds of cities, being big or small cities. To understand the feautures of the society, it is necessary to compare them, and for this to be possible we need to comprehend how people in small-scale places live as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...important chacacteristics of a society. but I can not agree with that, because smal...
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Suggestion: disqualify
...lation and others reasons, but does not disqualified a not known city to be studied. For exa...
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...ties, but always have something to add. The second point is the importance of sm...
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...tics, religion, government and commerce.In the other hand,Venice was extremely imp...
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Suggestion: , Venice
...overnment and commerce.In the other hand,Venice was extremely important for italy regar...
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...ortant for italy regarding the sea port.In the past, was the most important please...
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Suggestion: many trades
...e most important please in europe where many trade happened. In the time where european co...
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...se in europe where many trade happened. In the time where european countries, such...
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Suggestion: , Venice
...e or to bring species of another country,Venice was the main place where they traded th...
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Suggestion: this variety; those varieties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09151785714 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93117585493 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493303571429 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8041493217 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.928571429 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171014913453 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061626772805 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658014729455 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115918546414 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713871882595 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.