Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer or choice.
People want a place to relax from a long hectic work for whole day. It’s a point to ponder that what kind of accommodation they are going to leave all their tensions of workplace. If someone asks me to choose, which type of living space I would rather have, is it an apartment in tower block or a standalone house than I acknowledged for a traditional home. What is the justification of my answer? I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, your privacy will be compromised if you are living in a flat building. What if you want to swim solely and there are so many people around you? Isn't it making you uncomfortable? Furthermore, you have no right to do, favourite leisure time activity the gardening and to grow eye pleasing flowers and plants. In addition, gym having a limited hours and workout routine is not matching with your block gym. For example, you are doing dumbbells in morning around 6.45 and the gym open at 7.00am; you don’t have much time because you have to leave for your office at 7.30am. It will be tiring and hustling if you match up with gym timing. Secondly, you are free to park in your own garage if you are living separately; no one says it is my place, doesn’t park your car here. Moreover, there is no issue in planning late night parties and playing loud music while some shared buildings are not allowed in specific timings. To add more, you can have your pets in your own vicinity and they are free to roam around the house.
However, modern quarters require less cleaning and cumbersome furniture but for me, above circumstances can make my life miserable.
To sum up, in your own house you have much more freedom to do whatever you want besides it increases household chores and expenses as well but overtakes the conditions that apply in home units.
- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems Write a letter to your new employer In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him her when you think you can start 73
- A gift such as a camera a soccer ball or an animal can contribute to a child s development What gift would you give to help a child develop Why Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice 11
- News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures Some people believe that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 84
- you are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff. Write a letter to th 70
- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems Write a letter to your employer including your situation Your problems When you think you can start
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...nd there are so many people around you? Isnt it making you uncomfortable? Furthermor...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59384615385 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53844102556 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603076923077 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8804017524 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225024386603 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657458989616 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461994920759 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106703448986 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531962145175 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.