Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Employment-related debates are ubiquitous around the world. Although some argue that men must be preferred for occupations like defence and police force, others believe that both genders are equivalent. In this essay, I will discuss both views and also explain why I think both sexes must be given equal importance.
On the one hand, some argue that females are not adaptable for jobs in law enforcement agencies and military services because it requires more physical efforts. They claim that only men can cope up with the physical challenges during the tough period of training and working conditions. Although it may seem counterintuitive, it is evident in some countries like Pakistan where women are refrained from joining army and police services. Physical incompetency with men often hinders women from joining such forces.
Despite this, others, myself included, argue that both genders are eligible for working in any services. In my view, females have the potential to confront and tackle difficult situations more efficiently. Furthermore, the females will feel more secure to approach such agencies in case of any emergencies, if they have their same gender. The upsurge in the number of female police officers appointed in India has significantly lowered the women abuse cases, which was considered an unachievable task in the past. In other words, gender equality is beneficial for both women and society.
Even though women have certain drawbacks according to their physical abilities as compared to males, nowadays females have already proven their ability to cope up with repercussions. However, In my view, equal importance must be given for both genders
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, i think, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4030418251 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82964849588 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8245661763 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308534687296 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103321214665 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771091663565 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180655570435 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458271823026 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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