You have been studying overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned home. Write to the family. In your letter
• Thank them for having you.
• Say what you enjoyed about living with them.
• Tell them what your current plans are
Dear John, Suzi, and Maya,
How have you been? I already missed all of you. I’m sending this letter to thank you so much for the amazing time that I spent with you. Staying at your home was the best part of my entire studying stay in London. You were typically my second family, and I really enjoyed every moment with you.
The most enjoyable moments were when Maya surprised all of us by cooking her delicious apple pie. For me, it was the first time to taste this kind of sweets as it's not popular in my home country. That was just the best gift I’ve ever got after passing my exams. I barely remember the hardship of the exams, but I can remember how tasty the pie was.
About my exams, I’ve finally received my Master’s degree results and guess what! I’ve got A+. So my current plans are to complete my Ph.D. research studies. As you know, this is my childhood dream; I’ve always wanted to be a researcher as well as continue to be a professor. I hope to receive a scholarship in one of London’s universities so that we can meet and hang out together.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Yours,
Sara.
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- You have been studying overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently returned home Write to the family In your letter Thank them for having you Say what you enjoyed about living with them Tell them what your current 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
... can meet and hang out all together. Cant wait to hearing from you. Yours, Sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, well, kind of, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43540669856 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27270209001 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0533996443 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214678381541 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786835474478 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751268227986 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108070168303 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132353142712 0.0580467560999 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.