The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What are reasons for the growth in overweight people in society.
How can that problems be solved.
Getting a rid of health problems such as and obesity is seem to be tough nowadays. It is also undeniable fact that people weight is being surged and with this concern some hazardous health threats may be came. Both causes and solutions of a particular approach are provided in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, one of the main cause of this approach is an availability of the fast food at many places due to these people have a greed to eat any of those types of food whether these food has serious consequences on health or not and even they often forget to read some instructions that are easily available at an opposite side of a packaging. Although junk food has a great taste, many health problems are brought by this type of meals especially, obesity this problem sometimes intended to get persons death as well. Consequently if more junk food are consumed, then the risk of health problems would have been increased. Eventually, junk food causes overweight and a lot of health problems related to health are embraced.
Despite thinking about health problems, solution of this must be required in order to alleviate this problem. Primarily, people must prevent habit of worse eating food by consuming home-made made that not only decreases the chance of getting obsessed, but also enhance the opportunity of live a splendid lifestyle. For example, in the UK, individuals can live their life more than 60 years as compared to the USA because of the style of consuming meals. Additionally, much more costs can be improved to harmful food like fast food, so that people likely to buy it and eat it, this may prevent health problems at the major extent.
In conclusion, many health problems such as obesity are influenced by worst meals that contains a refined flour wheat floor but there are some solid solutions, which can be able to solve this approach which have been mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
... health problems such as and obesity is seem to be tough nowadays. It is also undeni...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eniable fact that people weight is being surged and with this concern some hazard...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
... eat any of those types of food whether these food has serious consequences on health or n...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erious consequences on health or not and even they often forget to read some inst...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... intended to get persons death as well. Consequently if more junk food are consumed, then th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85230769231 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5904695606 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5100144349 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285677881959 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11062695096 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570852320247 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172824077599 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268759022409 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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