Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
When the issue of wildlife conservation comes into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Some people claim that protecting wildlife and birds is not only drawing too much attention and but also wasting resources of society. Personally, I totally disagree with this point of view.
Though it is true that too much media coverages are spent on animal extinction, we should bear in mind that humans are reaping a number of benefits from living creatures that makes protection of animals a catching term. First and foremost, it goes without saying that wildlife conservation is in favor of a healthy biodiversity. For example, if any species living in tropical rainforest become extinct, the food chain will be disrupted and affect all the species. The worst case scenario for human, which is shortage of meat, could be expected. Moreover, it stands to reason that a wide diversity of species provides a plethora of natural service for the human beings. To be more specific,medicines that derived from the chemicals produced by animals give a helping hand in curing various health conditions, such as heart diseases and disorders. According to the U.S wildlife service, more than 25% of the medicinal prescriptions given every year contain chemicals from birds. This directly suggests that paying attention to preserving animals and birds is worthwhile.
Moreover, it is a foregone conclusion that wildlife conservation is not a waste of resources. To be more specific, the protection of natural habitats not only guarantees the survival of wild animals but also plays an integral part in the existence of human beings. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate, which is critical to mankind’s well being. If human destroyed green belts, pandemic could be expected, since human do not have enough clean air to function respiratory system. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both concern and resources are focused too much on the protection of wild animals and birds in this modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23768115942 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84178324104 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.98398216 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263548051343 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780291086425 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101894395599 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192625769523 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911554487876 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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