Your friend moved into new home. You want to give him/her a present. Write a letter:
Describe the present.
Tell why you want to give this present?
How will it be delievered to him/her?
Dear John,
First of all, felicitations for your new home. I am very happy, and I have already bought a present for you.
It's a photo collage which is having about ten pictures of our convocation, and has all the beautiful memories that we spent together during our post-graduation. I have tried to include all the members of our small group, especially Samantha, who was favourite of all of us.
I have chosen this gift for a specific reason as pictures on the walls add life to our home. This will not only add a character to your new apartment but also it will be aesthetically pleasing to the eyes.
I'm not gonna send you this by courier; infact, I'll come straight to your home, and I'll handover it to you with my own hands. I'll hang it in your bedroom all by myself.
I'm so excited to meet you, and to see your beautiful home.
With love,
Ramity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e already bought a present for you. Its a photo collage which is having about t...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... to your new apartment but also it will be aesthetically pleasing to the eyes. Im not gonna send you t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... aesthetically pleasing to the eyes. Im not gonna send you this by courier; inf...
^^
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...gonna send you this by courier; infact, Ill come straight to your home, and Ill han...
^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...l handover it to you with my own hands. Ill hang it in your bedroom all by myself. ...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ng it in your bedroom all by myself. Im so excited to meet you, and to see your...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47798742138 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56276767838 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1204328771 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168164963735 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676737853526 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560405545016 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103453074842 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556251105978 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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