The maps below show the changes in a town after a construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The given maps sketch out how a town has changed with a hydroelectric power dam constructed.
As shown in the illustration, the area was divided into two region by the river with mountains at every angle in 1990. The stucture was the same in 2010, but there existed a construction of a new fishing lake at the beginning of the river.
Having a closer look at the details, it is explixitly observed that in 1990, the west area to the river was wild with forest and ancient stucture to the northwest, rare plants and animals to the middle weast while in the east area, there were a village and irrigated farmlands. Those things however disappeared in 2010, giving place to many other constructions except for the villages.
It is interesting to note that the structure was a complete difference from that of 1990. To build a new lake, the river flow was interupted by mountain. Along the two sides of the river, lots of electricity poles appeared mainly in the west side while in the east there are villages other than the poles. A huge hotel was also constructed by the fishing lake for commercial purposes.
- Being a celebrity such as a movie star or professional athlete brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks 81
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey with sample the cross section of 100 000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travel for the period 1994 to 1998 The second chart shows their destinations over the same period Write a repo 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 71
- The maps below show the changes in a town after a construction of a hydroelectric power dam 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
...stration, the area was divided into two region by the river with mountains at every an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67599973728 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1073114429 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117546710134 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587733936745 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116098527707 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114130751733 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154021385254 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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