Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages
Because, human being always behind his/her evolvement,since they were existed. Hence, inhabitants have been moving to other places for study and work. Is this movement immensely beneficial to them? I will Express my view points in following paragraphs.
To begin with, to migrate from rural villages to developed cities have many advantages for an education or a job. Firstly, the major benefit is better and further education. Though, they were getting basic education as well as limited jobs opportunities. Certainly they could get good duties in advance areas. Furthermore, with the help of proper learning, which is appropriated to the responsibilities of the organizations. Secondly, the significance of living standard. In addition to it, advanced infrastructure, and well maintained health care system which is does not exist in remote location. For example, I'm am belongs to a village and residences are usually goes to other places for the entail medicine apart from this, that I had had my graduation from outside as well. However, above mentioned aspects would be vital, but same time it would be the reason for their leaving respectively.
Despite, more and more people especially youth's are moving to other regions could be a cause of less development of their native places. On top of that, their families might left alone. For instance, rather than they try to came to their home, and do development, and to help neighbors by educating them, they prefer to stay away from these issues. So this would be the main disadvantage.
To conclusion, it is enormously difficult for some one to move and establish him self in other areas, but it really important for those who are wants to do something for their family and habitats. So I must say advantages would be more than its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93217553987 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4888527523 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1578947368 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168331108826 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425976166273 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439001996671 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941648184711 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263546433754 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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