Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some that how satisfied we feel with our jobs is more important than job security, while others believe that doing a job that frees us from unemployment and gives us a stable salary is more practical and should be the major factor to be considered while seeking a job. I am personally in favour of the viewpoint of the first group.
On the one hand, I accept that having a job that ensures we have a solid income is crucial for a number of reasons. Firstly, given the fact that there are a large number of new graduates facing a problem of not being able to find a proper job on a yearly basis, staying in the same job is, therefore, a less risky choice than switching job to find job satisfaction. Furthermore, a stable income helps people to meet basic needs, for example, housing, healthcare service, education. Thus, they are more likely to prioritise to earn salary that can cover all these needs and have a sufficient amount of money to live comfortably.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that we should never give up on finding a job that can make us happy and fulfill. The first reason for this is being satisfied with what we do is a motivation for us to work harder. We are less likely to hesitate to explore different aspects of our jobs and learn from others. As a consequence, we can make progress on the corporate ladder, stand a golden chance to be promoted and receive a higher salary. In addition, job satisfaction is a vital factor to improve our general quality of life. Because of the fact that we have to dedicate the majority of our life to work, people who do not have the opportunity to do what they want might have a greater chance to be stressful and even have mental problems, such as depression.
From what has been discussed above, although some people claim that job security plays a vital role while we are looking for a job, I am of the opinion that we should seek a job that brings us a sense of satisfaction rather than stability.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Firstly, given the fact that there are a large number of new graduates facing a problem of not b...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...to improve our general quality of life. Because of the fact that we have to dedicate the majority of our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45753424658 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56623864525 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0544167185 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357939111061 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116910412087 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123267258041 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257497405047 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978755714477 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Firstly, given the fact that there are a large number of new graduates facing a problem of not b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...to improve our general quality of life. Because of the fact that we have to dedicate the majority of our...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45753424658 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56623864525 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0544167185 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357939111061 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116910412087 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123267258041 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257497405047 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978755714477 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.