Some say that young and energetic employees are most valuable for the company, while others argue that older employees who have more experience and knowledge are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are still competition between young workers and older workers from applying for the same position in the company. There are some ideas that elders will bring more benefits for the company due to their involved background knowledge in the profession. However, I would argue that the younger will put more value on the company with their dynamic and willing to learn abilities by comparing with the old.
The option to hire older employees is beneficial for several reasons. The old have years of experience and essential skills, such as face-to-face communication, planning, timekeeping. The company therefore will save an amount of money for training courses. Moreover, older workers are more likely to stick with the company as they don’t have the desire to change the jobs. In the other words, they are apparently loyal.
On the other hand, I believe that it will bring more advantages for the company to hire the youth. Firstly, young employees can bring fresh atmosphere by their differences and creative thinking. Secondly, adaptability and agility help the younger learn new thing more quickly and be able to deal with sudden change or problems, especially related to technology. And the last benefit is that hiring young employees might be less expensive than hiring older. This element might be fundamental to those companies whose budged is small.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the dynamic youth would bring more benefits for the company.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20247933884 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58567095416 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.315804562 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27531761983 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929598162609 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044443311511 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162687920451 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364186307403 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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