You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter.
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college – Already post graduate degree, expensive study
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her – you need experience now, get practical experience, high wages job in your field.
Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. My work keeps me so busy, that I never have a minute to myself. I’m writing this letter to advise you regarding either choosing a job or doing further study at university. I would like you to prefer to grab a white-collar job instead of going to further study. Let me explain to you why.
Let me elaborate, to commence with, as you know you already completed your post-graduation from Oxford University and now you have a computer science degree with high grades. I personally think that this level of education is quite sufficient to grab decent wages paid jobs in the IT field. Additionally, to enhance the knowledge of computer science you should consider getting practical experience in this area.
There are plenty of job vacancies are available in the software development area. Since you have a higher education degree with you. I would suggest you apply for the project manager, Team leader, and senior software engineer job positions. I’m quite sure you would get a job soon.
Take care and feel free to contact me if you are seeking for more information.
With best wishes,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
.... I’m writing this letter to advise you regarding either choosing a job or doing further ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...cient to grab decent wages paid jobs in the IT field. Additionally, to enhance the kno...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...o grab decent wages paid jobs in the IT field. Additionally, to enhance the knowledge...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lable in the software development area. Since you have a higher education degree with...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation. With best wishes, Deepak
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87081339713 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63083939151 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.469594486 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290316376753 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949267001402 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613332943221 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16664686695 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628310922105 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.