The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

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The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The provided line graph illustrates the annual average number of married and divorced people in the UK in 25-year period.
At first glance, while the data of total marriages, the second marriages and divorces tended to rise considerably between 1975 and 2000, there was a signigicant data in the figure of the first married people.
On average, total marriages contributed roughly 500 thousand people, the highest detail, to the whole number of people in the UK; whereas, the amount of people being divorced stood at the lowest point among the four types of citizens, at just under 100 thousand.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, we can see that there was a substantial increase in the figure for total married adults, which accounted for approximately 110 thousand from 1975 to 2000. Likewise, after a gradual upturn throughout this period of time, the second marriages and divorces had the same figure, at nearly 250 thousand. By contrast, the number of the first married adults dipped moderately by about 20 thousand from 1975 to 2000.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... after a gradual upturn throughout this period of time, the second marriages and divorces had ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, likewise, look, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01714285714 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54654628059 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8126895403 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314771791396 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150842637906 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481902114872 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186475754545 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352520519902 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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