A letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student at My Duc A High School, which is one of the schools in Ha Noi. And I recently saw an advertisement for your course on improving memory.
I have just started a new school year at a new school which is at a higher level so I have to learn many new things as well as subjects. However, it requires that I need to remember all the new knowledge immediately to prepare for the tests which can happen anytime. And the problem is that I always forget the important information or do not remember exactly it. The rate I can remember the new knowledge is just 40%. As a result, I can not do well on the tests. Therefore, I feel really nervous and also find some methods which can help me with improving my memory like visualization, association techniques,... However, the results are quite opposite to my expectation and I feel it did not work on me. Perhaps because I do not how to use it as effectively as possible.
I would be grateful if you could give me more detailed information about the methods that you use in the course, as well as the fees and the dates of your courses. I don't have a great deal of time, so I hope you can offer flexible hours. And it is really thankful if I can have a class on Tuesday and Thursday.
I think that I could get benefits from this course and also look forward to replying.
Yours faithfully
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student at My Duc A High School, ...
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...ke visualization, association techniques,... However, the results are quite opposi...
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... to use it as effectively as possible. I would be grateful if you could give me...
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...rse and also look forward to replying. Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26923076923 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65087905483 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.165404235 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2857142857 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.