Many people do not pay enough attention to their mental and physical well-being. What are the causes of this? Support your opinion with explanations and examples and provide possible solutions.
Nowadays, people are becoming more and more unfit mentally and physically. Many people suffer from mental and physical causes such as stress, anxiety, depression and tiredness and many more, these lead to lower quality of life. The most common causes are people neglect their health because of work and entertainment, and the solution are better time management and proper diet.
To begin with, these days people do not invest their time in their mental and physical health because of work and entertainment. To explain this, many individuals work hard and spend 10 to 12 at the work site five days a week to make ends meet and these figures are skyrocketing nowadays. At the end of the day, they have time for themselves and opt to watch movies and playing video games on the couch rather than spending time with family or going to the gym. These lifestyles eventually lead to many mental and physical causes. For example, according to WHO, 55% of adults are suffering from mental stress and overweight due to lack of exercise and poor diet.
However, mental and physical fitness deterioration can be reduced by taking proper nutrition and utilize the time. To illustrate this, nowadays people don’t have enough time to cook because of the hectic schedule so they eat unhealthy and fast-food. Therefore, people should add fruits, beans and protein foods, which helps to keep energetic and helps to released emotional stress. Furthermore, persons should invest their free time in physical exercise into the gym and swimming clubs rather than spending time on the couch to watch movies and playing digital games. Therefore, this productive step leads to help people keep physically fit.
In conclusion, people are ignoring the emotional and physical movement nowadays. to resolve this problem people should consume protein foods and join the gym and swimming clubs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49407003147 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5302918442 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232117145037 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867208507976 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525740147473 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145387136694 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337597263113 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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