A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Brownni,
Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I'm feeling blissful while inscribing this letter to get acquainted you with my trip to Canada as scheduled in may 2020. After receiving invitation from your end, I could not resist myself and finally planned the whole itinerary. Besdie all of this, i aspire you to inform me regarding liking and prefernces of your family members which would assist me in buying presents for them.
Even though, i'm not a travel lover but Canada has always been my dream land. Most importantly nothing can relxe me as much as scenaries of nature can do and environment over there entice me towards it. Thus, endow me with the prerequsites of commuting to this place like what kind of clothes i need to pack to avoid the untoward weather conditions. Moreover, provide me the blue prints of the activities which will be persaued by us.
As far as cuisines is concerned, I'm fond of eating distinct kind of food. Thats why i insist you to make a to-do list in which variety of food must be at the top. Furthermore, here you need to know something very crucial that i have allergy to spicy dishes and try not to include such consumable items.
Hope to hear from you soon and have wealthy weekend ahead.
Your lovingly,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...radiant health and best of the spirits. Im feeling blissful while inscribing this ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he whole itinerary. Besdie all of this, i aspire you to inform me regarding likin...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to this place like what kind of clothes i need to pack to avoid the untoward weat...
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...us. As far as cuisines is concerned, Im fond of eating distinct kind of food. T...
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...m fond of eating distinct kind of food. Thats why i insist you to make a to-do list i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70689655172 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44765351488 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685344827586 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6939279854 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185840250292 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061140106628 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480721244289 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108161889819 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653942920111 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.