You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Samvedna Puri, currently designated to the position of Asistant Manager in the Sales department. I am feeling anticipated while inscribing this epistle to submit a humble request regarding granting me one month off from work. Meanwhile working as section head, I am also persuing Masters in Business Administration at Government college and final examination is scheduled in next month.
Even though I will be absent from work for some period but i can assure you that it will not suffer. Because, it is just the beginning of finacial year and does not consitute much burden and after completion of course all the pending stuff will be serenly completed. It would be highly appreciable if you could ensure the permission of break for exams.
Undoubtedly, the accomplishment of this degree would certainly endow me with pragmetic skills and knowledge which would surely bestow me great assistance in my offical work. Consequently, the acquired wisdom would broader the parameters of critical thinking that would help in enhancing the sale promotions through innovative ideas. Thats how I can serve this organisation in multifarious ways and can bring the laurels.
I aspire a prompt and positive response from your end as soon as possible.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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- we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 84
- You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind write to restaurant Tell them when you went there describe where you think you may have left the credit card explain what you would like the restaurant to do 57
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ng granting me one month off from work. Meanwhile working as section head, I am also pers...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...be absent from work for some period but i can assure you that it will not suffer....
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...le promotions through innovative ideas. Thats how I can serve this organisation in mu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27142857143 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90415684565 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704761904762 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3263609563 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202176148581 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656505529686 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056867421256 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933523366384 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639819504091 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.