Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recent years have seen intense debate on whatever factors is the key for a nation to develop. The majority of administrations place top priority on economic growth, whilst others stay with the belief that other aspects such as culture, the environment, and healthcare are also prominent to the development of a country itself. this essay will shed light upon both views before rendering my perspective.
On the one hand, many people believe that stimulating the economic sector can benefit their countries in such ways. there is a common belief that economic development would enhance people' life conditions. To be more specific, as a wealthy country, the governments are enabled to subsidize for education and health facilities; therefore, uplifting the quality of life of citizens. Furthermore, the unemployment line will be cut short owing to foreign companies start to invest more in the country, which will open-up more and more job opportunities, and this will boost the living standard of the people.
On the other hand, it is said that other factors can, too, create enormous impacts on the development of the nation itself. Let's take the aspect of the environment as a typical example; many developed countries have neglected the importance of it, and in the long run, this will significantly result in horrifying consequences. For instance, governments have deforested to make space for factories and to build transport system. Exhaust fumes from them can pollute the air which lead to respiratory-related diseases among dwellers living nearby.
In conclusion, although I concede that there is some merit in prioritizing economic development as the country's main aim, I firmly believe that governments should treat other aspects as equally as well.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33691756272 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00888745772 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.930764503 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173597600922 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062160723968 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418490911143 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105621731733 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175362356514 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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