As an international student in Sweden, you have an account with a local bank. The monthly bank transfer you receive from your parents has been delayed this month due to an error at your parents’ bank.
introduce yourself and ask for a loan
say why you need the money
tell how you intend to pay back the money
Dear Sir,
My name as per my international Id is Jot and I am international student from India studying at the University of Sweden. I am holding my student account in your bank with customer ID: IND87. I am writing this letter to request a short term loan from your bank.
My parents have transferred money from India yesterday but due to some technical issues in the head branch of the root bank hence, a transaction has not completed. On enquiring, they informed my parents that it might take two weeks to sort the error.
I have to pay my examination fee till the 20th of this month only four days are left and if I would not pay the fee before the due day, the college will not allow me to sit in the exam. Therefore, it is my humble request to kindly do me a favor.
I will pay the loan as soon as I received the amount in my account from India and will take two weeks for resolving the error.
Look forward to hearing a positive reply from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...Sir, My name as per my international Id is Jot and I am international student f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36898395722 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45697338939 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8313154552 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243427350744 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995499815998 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566253958525 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119198079993 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607583558282 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.