The bar chart gives information about the percentage of females aged 15-25 in a particular country who watch and participate in sports.
The given bar chart demonstrates the proportion of girls who belong to the 16 to 25 age group in a certain country that watch and take part in physical activities.
Generally, as can be seen from the chart, both proportion of women who watch and that of which participate in tennis has the largest portion compared to other sports, while badminton seem to be not popular like others.
According to the chart, girls who watch tennis accounts for the majority of the total, equivalent to a half, compared to under 5% of the counterparts who opt to watch badminton. Athletics and basketball lag behind tennis with 15%, which is still significantly higher than golf together with house riding and racing, with a tenth and 5% respectively.
Looking closely to the chart, in the figure of women who take part in sports, the percentages of tennis and golf have the largest figure out of all six, standing at approximately a third. After that, basketball cames next with over a fifth. What stands out from the data is that girls do not participate in badminton as more as other sports, with only over 10. Athletics along with house riding and racing occupied the fourth and fifth place, standing at 10% and 7% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...do not participate in badminton as more as other sports, with only over 10. Athlet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80568720379 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371179949 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6285345759 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195277619896 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819503771651 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824929498287 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134248728843 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724713569405 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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