Advantages and disadvantages of receiving education online
Advantages and disadvantages of receiving education online.
Advantages of receiving education online are we sit in the comfort,at home we can do lessons free,for lazy children it is very well,because they do their lessons when they want.For the children ,who want to study by heart they will study in any situations, in any condition.For them it is not problem to study online and they are receiving education online as in school.How they study at school they are continue to study online.
There are any disadvantages of studying online,one of them,it is bad for our eyes,because we sit and look to the TV,telephone and to the laptop.Some children do not watch lessons,do not do the homeworks.For lazy students it is good not to do the homework and say to the parents that he or she do homework, but he or she play games or sit in the other channels or talking with someone.Some students think that if they do not do the lessons,their parents and teachers do not know about it,but all teachers know who do the homework.who do not.Teachers check all homework and put marks.
In my opinion to receive education in the school it is better than to studying online.There are more disadvantages of receiving education online than advantages.But if people want to receive education he os she will study in any condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88839285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12300637938 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.848133087 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.75 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279606004734 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.320385897821 0.084324248473 380% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241465527465 0.0667982634062 361% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320385897821 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241465527465 0.056905535591 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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